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Each year we run an essay competition for medical students with some excellent essays which you can see below. 

2016 Student Essay Competition

In this year’s Student Essay Competition we asked the students to write an essay of up to 1500 words on the following title:

Diagnosis: Are we medicalising human experience? A radical review.

This is a challenging title at undergraduate level, but the entrants streamed in from all across the UK and the standard was remarkably high. Interestingly, many of the entrants did not assume that medicalisation of human experience is necessarily a bad thing, as most writers on the subject seem to do. We were looking for a well-researched essay that set a balance of scholarship and humanity, and covered all the key issues relevant to the title. This year’s winner, Vinay Mandagere from the University of Bristol, wrote a short essay that achieved all of this. Vinay will receive a cash prize of £250. The two runners-up, Alice Redfern from the University of Oxford, and Robbie Newman from Imperial College, London, were also highly commendable.

2015 Student Essay Competition

This year we asked for an essay based on one of the words from the BHMA “Holistic dimensions”. This was a collection of eleven words (now twelve) describing the holistic approach to healthcare:
connected – compassionate – self-caring – intuitive – integrated – empowered – resilient – balanced –  diverse – meaningful – community-minded
Together they encompass the qualities needed to become a holistic practitioner. We were looking for stories that illustrate one of these themes via the student’s personal or professional life.
Once again a difficult decision, the judges opted to name two winners both wrote on Compassionate

Joint First Place

Eleanor Tanner Yr4, BirminghamEleanor Tanner
The Star of Compassion

Microsoft Word - Lucy Brennan joint student essay winner photo.dLucy Brenner Yr3, Brighton and Sussex
Cultivating compassion – students to lead the way?

Third Place – on Resilient

Tamar WitztumTamar Witztum
 Yr2, Bristol
Resilience in holistic care: Learning from Alice Herz-Sommer

Fourth Place – on Connected

Julius KremlingJulius Kremling
 Yr 4 Ruhr, Germany
Why connection matters: Understanding patients’ illness by understanding their reality

Special commendation goes to Louise Cox Yr2, Bristol – on Resilient
Holistic Healthcare: Being Resilient


2014 Student Essay Competition

The given essay title was:  
“Coping with your own vulnerability in caring for a person who has a long-term condition”
Nearly all the entrants wrote about their experience within their own circle of friends and family. Some of their stories included harrowing events, told with a degree of emotional insight well beyond their ages.

This was the first year judges decided on joint winners. Their essays were outstanding in their honesty and in their clarity of thought and expression. Both essays were published in the Journal of Holistic Healthcare.

Joint First Place

Microsoft Word - Chiara Catterwell.docChiara Catterwell-Sinkeldam King’s college, London
Read Chiara’s Essay

Microsoft Word - Laura Clapham.docLaura Clapham King’s College, London
Read Laura’s Essay


Third Place

Olivia SjokvistOlivia Sjökvist Hull
Read Olivia’s Essay

Previous winners

2013  Kundan Iqbal    The importance of holism in medical care today and ways this can be promoted

2012  Reanne Jones    Tears of Joy, tears of sorrow

2011  Thea Collins    2030: What made the NHS sustainable?

2010  Jason Ferdjani    Improving global well being, improving personal well being

2009  Krishna Steedhar    Student’s health matters 

2008  Phoebe Votolato    Being a Medical student

2007  Lewis Morgan    A good holistic practitioner